Week 10 Learned from the Critique

From the critique I learned a lot of beficial information. From the second i hung it up in front of everyone, i knew i hated it. There were too many photos on my first pages that i didnt like. The text caused issues with empty space. My numbers on the pages looked terrible to me, needed to be much smaller. My solo sunglass illustration should be much smaller and placed in between text.
I also learned from the critique that everyone's idea of a creative magazine spread is different, i can't please everyone, but at least i can learned from their perspectives.
I plan on moving illustrations around, creating new text boxes, and working on my titles and page numbers.